For ficrecfriday

Author: why_s0_srs
Fandom: Batman/Dark Knight
Community: the_lucky13
Prompt: 13 Things to do when the power is out.
Link: http://community.livejournal.com/the_lucky13/117304.html
Notes: This prompt made me laugh out loud. I really needed it the day I saw it but still going back to reread it I laughed again.

Author: red_eyed_sin
Fandom: Marvel Comics
Community: theatrical_muse
Prompt: Five Steps to a Successful Negotiation?  
Link: http://red-eyed-sin.livejournal.com/51482.html
Notes: This is so well written for the muse and it had a quality that made me snicker.

Author: fannyfae
Fandom: Original Character/Folklore/Historical Fiction
Community: theatrical_muse
Prompt: First Things Remembered
Link: http://fannyfae.livejournal.com/171433.html
Notes: I love the imagery in this piece. There's a sense of being there to it that I don't often get from the physical setting. Even with the setting being so strong the emotions and the meanings are no less.

Author: ambitious_woman
Fandom: Dr. Who? Historical? (I don't know honestly.. oops)
Community: theatrical_muse
Prompt: What is the first thing you remember?
Link: http://ambitious-woman.livejournal.com/90067.html
Notes: I love the dark calm. I like how the sentences are all short and separate without fully formed paragraphs. The writing style, the words, everything works toward the lonely darkness.

Lucky 13: 17.3 - 13 laws you think should be changed.

1. Directive 17. The whole fucking bullshit of killing people for having unauthorized sex, looking at porn, eating beef and all the rest of that bullshit has got to be the worst fucking law ever made.
2. Life term presidency. Another of Robertson's laws that needs to be rid of.
3. Laws on marriage. As long as it's consensual and of age that's all that matters to the law. The one man, one woman bullshit is religion. Sounds like someone forgot the separation of church and state.
4. I really think drugs, illegal drugs, should be mass manufactured and sold at a steep price, monitored and regulated. Not because I think the government should be involved but because all the bad shit and impure shit on the streets causes more ODs and death than I think shit that is regularly produced would. Also allow you to regulate how much a person can get to stop crash addiction.
5. I'd really like the judicial system back
6.... and the Bill of Rights
7.... and the Constitution while we're at it.
8. Get rid of the fucking law that says medical care is only provided to those deemed worthy by the government.
9. Legalize gunfighting and gambling. Be better for everyone involved.
10. Get rid of that fucking law that says children of parents deemed unfit by the government should be "removed from society".
11. The government sterilization program really fucking sucks
12. Law says the government only has to distribute food to those who they deem to be productive members of society.
13. ID chip implantation. What the hell do I look like a dog or a steer? Bullshit.


Muse: Snake Plissken
Fandom: Escape from NY/LA

Fic Commentary Meme

Request any fic of mine and I will provide you with a commentary/annotations, like a DVD extra.

I have a lot of them out there, but I can pretty much find any that are requested. This goes for my other muses as well:

sacredeyes
autohomicide
lordgwaihir
todd3465_582
jp_hammond
Of course if you know any muses I used to write and want to request there feel free to but these are the ones I currently write.

For true_writers Picture prompt.

Snake wasn't so sure about meeting in this place. Then again Snake didn't care for meeting anyone any where. Too many years of being ambushed and betrayed would easily explain away the tension if Plissken cared enough to think about it. The door was open or rather the glass was broken out. Plissken walked in to the semi-lit building. Light filtered in through the many windows onto the dusty and ransacked main room. Something was familiar about this place though it was not immediately clear. Plissken walked in and pulled out one of the chairs from the junk which he placed against one of the pillars to sit and wait. His eye kept roving over the place with curiosity.

( Memories of a different place )

Words: 1315

For 10_letters 011: Forbidden

Title: Me and Forbidden
Rating: G
Fandom: John Carpenter's Escape from NY/LA and Elizabeth
Character: Snake Plissken to Queen Elizabeth I
Prompt: 30b 011: Forbidden


Elizabeth,

Hey sweetheart. Hope you know why I'm writing. If not you will soon enough. The package you should really save for the court celebration though I will be disappointed I'm not there to see the results of it. Come to think of it, that might just be worth that flight across the ocean. I admit it. I'm trying to start more scandal. Can't help myself. They're all such idiots, ready to chatter about whatever they can. No way I can resist teasing them. It's too easy. For your own concerns though it might be better to open them in private, at least the flat package anyway. Save you all the questions and gossip. I'm sure that gift is forbidden when it comes to a rogue man giving it to a queen, probably any man now that I get to thinking. All the more reason to buy it as far as I'm concerned. Me and forbidden, I don't know the meaning of that word.

Hard to buy for a queen. Hope you like them.

Love you baby,
Snake.


Accompanying the letter are two packages. a rather square one and a a flat one.

Words: 184

Feedback

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